I found a weekly 100 word challenge at Velvet Verbosity. Every week, she chooses a theme and challenges writers to write a 100 word story for it. This week's theme was Whistling.
Here is my story. Title: Danny
Danny crossed the street at the intersection of Orion and Pine. The sky was vividly blue, rare for Seattle. He smiled up at the azure canopy and began to whistle as he drew closer to home. The melody had been with him for weeks, haunting his dreams.
He was lost in the tune and he didn’t see the car coming. Danny stepped into the street, whistling clearly. When his legs broke, so did his song. His skull shattered the windshield and his blood coagulated there as he rolled off the hood. He could still hear the melody as he died.
wow! that ended sadly. Great job.
ReplyDeleteSad story, great drama :)
ReplyDeleteThat's sad but i guess this has a mysterious tinge to it somehow. Can grow up in to a great plot.
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